I wish I could think of better words to describe how your work makes me feel. This was so well done. It felt like your words were slowly winding around me and squeezing tighter and I didn't realize it until the end but I was holding my breath.
I am close to the edge and I have no shadow here though there is a little light a little color Never been so near this night country, heard so clearly its hypnotic droning my ears possessed pretenders to the throne mascots, marauders Maybe I can scatter crumbs to find my way back burst these seams stifle lust long enough to render this lust inanimate Where will I place my hands? How will I tell my heart it is no soldier no child? How do I dress these wounds, display my fate, present these heirloom lies to the world? Your love left initiation scars along my spine pigment on my eyes – they only look as if they’re open as if they’re closed We are so heavy, so slight I never promised you freedom from pain – only beauty, of this earth and of this life balance the semblance of the hard-spun world on its axis a temporary fire you can hold for a little while return before it’s time I will believe you if you tell me you lied believe you if you stutter trade my sight for a simple sustenance look upon the sky as if it were water revisit our boundaries etch them in sand, the delicate canvas of our lives |
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