The Eclectic Pen - Bed of Pillows

By: Lynn B. (seraphina) + 7 more
Date Submitted: 3/21/2007
Genre: Children's Books » Baby-3
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In our bed of Pillows, you and I. We listen as the birdies fly, past our window , while we lie, in our bed of pillows, you and I.We Listen as they sing their song, singing joyful all day long.While we lie here peacefully, In our bed of pillows You and Me.

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IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 3/21/2007 7:15 PM ET

very nice

Tom A. (TomsBooks333) - 3/23/2007 9:24 AM ET

Nice, provokes sensual thoughts

Cindy K. - 3/28/2007 1:37 AM ET

its cute without being too sugary & suffocating - Kira Really nice. Something I could imagine reading to my 2 or 3 year old, while wallowing in bed. Would love to be able to see the illustrations in your mind that goes with it. -Cindy P.S. Tom's a perv. - Cindy & Kira

Tom A. (TomsBooks333) - 4/12/2007 9:30 PM ET

That comment from Cindy K. about a perv. is not true and not appreciated.

Tom A. (TomsBooks333) - 4/12/2007 9:33 PM ET

I didn't notice the Genre was children's no offense intended

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