Helpful Score: 1
There are several flaws in this book but one of the biggest is the lifeless and one dimensional characters. All Anton ever seems to think or say is "Mine, mine, mine, mine!" It's exhausting to read "mine" for 219 pages. Greg's character is no better with his stunted speech. With him constantly saying the word "Dude" I became bored very easily.
Another flaw is that the book reads as one continuous sex scene. Granted this is an erotic romance, however, around the 8th scene I found myself rolling my eyes at the ridiculousness of each lack luster sex scene. Every sex scene is the same. One of the main characters is a chef, you would at least think this would give the author a chance to be a little more creative...
Another flaw is that the book reads as one continuous sex scene. Granted this is an erotic romance, however, around the 8th scene I found myself rolling my eyes at the ridiculousness of each lack luster sex scene. Every sex scene is the same. One of the main characters is a chef, you would at least think this would give the author a chance to be a little more creative...
