Sophira B. (sophiraness) - 10/23/2008 9:48 AM ET

I read it once, twice, three times - still the depth of thought and stream of consiousness in the writing left me feeling left out; as if these thoughts weren't meant for me - to see or hear, or even understand. Just when I begin to get it, the clarity curls away from me and leaves another mystery. Writing like this cannot be judged, but if you can grasp it, it can be appreciated.

Sophira B. (sophiraness) - 10/23/2008 9:51 AM ET

Ahh, I think...I think maybe i got it! The fourth time's the charm.

Eva L. (wearetrees) - 10/25/2008 5:28 PM ET

This poem is about...someone with whom I share a spiritual, intellectual and physical connection, but who is a gypsy at heart and cannot be contained by the world in my eyes; someone to whom I whisper goodbye over and over again because we are more at ease when we are apart than when we are entangled in each other's arms; someone with whom I can defy logic, revere the unexpected, challenge fate, but whom I cannot love with all of my being, and who cannot give me what I need - because I would take everything from him.

Sophira B. (sophiraness) - 10/29/2008 1:12 PM ET

Oh my, Eva. Oh my. even your explanation is poetic! Im loving your style