By: Lynn B. (seraphina) + 7 more
Date Submitted: 8/28/2007
Last Updated: 8/28/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 39
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Ever Faithful

Brown, sorrowful,
Full of intelligence.

Watching, waiting,
Running, chasing.

The Ball is his God,
His purpose,
His focus.

All else falls away,
only the Ball remains.

Running,chasing, returning.

Always ready.
Always watching.
Always returning.

Ever Faithful.

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Lynn B. (seraphina) - 9/4/2007 11:13 PM ET

any guesses what this poem is about?

Andrea G. - 9/6/2007 11:28 PM ET

gee, could it be a dog?

Lynn B. (seraphina) - 9/7/2007 2:07 AM ET

I know it is obvious, but I do love the big brown lug. This poem fits him so well.

Lori R. (lorilou) - 9/12/2007 11:42 AM ET

this is a beautiful piece of poetry - I has depth and meaning for me!! Thank you for you thoughts. Lori Rich

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