The Eclectic Pen - Feline Mystery (Haiku)


By: Silvercat -   + 22 more  
Date Submitted: 6/18/2007
Last Updated: 1/14/2016
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 20
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  Red cat swiping paw
At invisible something.
What is that you see?

Looking just past me
In a trance-state, pupils large.
Shivers prick my spine...


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IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 6/18/2007 6:55 PM ET
cute
Marta J. (booksnob) - 6/19/2007 11:22 AM ET
So cute!
Carole E. - 6/19/2007 9:17 PM ET
Wish I could see like a cat ! cute
Elizabeth B. (meowysmiles) - - 6/24/2007 2:51 AM ET
cute : )
Sabiel C. (sabu423) - 7/6/2007 12:08 AM ET
cute
Nora F. (nora777) - 9/1/2020 8:18 PM ET
This certainly brings to mind a cat we had in my long-ago youth. Quite a hunter, that one. Trance-like state, indeed!
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