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The Eclectic Pen - haiku #11

By: IONE L. (zaneygraylady)   + 85 more  
Date Submitted: 4/3/2007
Last Updated: 5/22/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 9

  birds in morning song
harmonize with gentle rain
I awake softly

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Maggie M. - 4/3/2007 10:08 PM ET
Very nice! Do you enjoy working with the 5-7-5 scheme?
IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 4/3/2007 10:51 PM ET
It is more restricting but I do enjoy it. Thanks for telling me about it. I don't know if I will stick with it for all but it's fun to try. I do like structure. I also like finding something beautiful each day to write about. It's not too much of a challenge on nice spring days but on grey winter days I'll have to really look hard.
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