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The Eclectic Pen
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Haiku Minus Sixteen
By:
Scott W. (Rev)
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Date Submitted:
2/13/2007
Genre:
Literature & Fiction
»
Poetry
Words:
1
Rating:
Noodle.
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Comments 1 to 8 of 8
IONE L.
(
zaneygraylady
)
- 2/15/2007 4:02 PM ET
I think you lost yours :)
Marta J.
(
booksnob
)
- 2/15/2007 4:42 PM ET
Um.....Scott?
Jim H.
(
Pecos45
)
- 2/15/2007 11:00 PM ET
I can critique this in one word too. "Stupid"
Scott W.
(
Rev
)
- 2/15/2007 11:25 PM ET
Silence is golden When your thoughts are not polite Keep it to yourself
Scott W.
(
Rev
)
- 2/15/2007 11:26 PM ET
Corrected version: Silence is golden/When your thoughts are not polite/Keep it to yourself
Mark M.
- 2/17/2007 10:26 AM ET
I rather like it. It’s a bit reminiscent of Ogden Nash. The meter was interesting, and overall, I like that it was appropriately short.
Samantha W.
(
Amsamfa
)
- 2/17/2007 10:34 PM ET
Brilliant.
Courtney Z.
- 3/1/2007 3:43 PM ET
This is the best one!!!!!!! Talk about judicious editing. LOL
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