The Eclectic Pen - haiku -- untitled

By: Paul H. (nessus19) - , + 43 more
Date Submitted: 3/20/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 10
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what destiny is
shaped when hands are removed by
decisions not made

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Judy M. (foreveramom) - 3/20/2007 8:38 PM ET

oh my, we do have some control. Thank you, J

IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 3/20/2007 9:36 PM ET

great made me think

Kathleen N. (Katylovesbooks) - 3/20/2007 9:37 PM ET

very good. When you dont try to shape life, life happens.

Marta J. (booksnob) - 3/21/2007 8:57 AM ET

Thought-provoking. Nice!

Wendy lee L. (wendylee) - 5/10/2007 11:56 PM ET

sad, sweet bitter choice made when heart is not engaged decisions left cold......... thank you, paul

Wendy lee L. (wendylee) - 5/10/2007 11:57 PM ET

my comment was supposed to be a hiaku! ooops, it looks more like a "run-on"sentence now!! (O:

Eva L. (wearetrees) - 2/19/2009 2:51 PM ET

if we can wield choice/ and refuse to honor fate/ what, then, is free will?

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