The Eclectic Pen - I Lost HerTo An Older Man

By: Paul H. (nessus19) - , + 43 more
Date Submitted: 2/8/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 24
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I lost her to an older man
One with holes in his hands and feet
She seems happy now
But those long distance relationships never work out

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Marta J. (booksnob) - 2/8/2007 2:47 PM ET

I really appreciate and enjoy the wry bite to your pieces that you've submitted! You're good.

IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 2/8/2007 5:19 PM ET

I like this

Ann K. (liblit) - 2/8/2007 8:55 PM ET

It made me think a bit which is good.

Lance C. - 2/9/2007 5:59 PM ET

true

Donna H. (d417) - , - 2/11/2007 3:34 AM ET

that depends on beleif ... long distance isn't that had if you believe and love enough

Janet C. (janutee) - 2/13/2007 9:58 PM ET

Clever! How did you lose her, you devil, you?

Maggie M. - 3/31/2007 3:29 AM ET

Did she get her to a nunnery, or what?

Dedra J. (Dedra) - 4/27/2007 8:00 PM ET

DENISE F. (deniseann) - 5/15/2007 2:22 PM ET

I am new to this website -- as of yesterday. What a powerful poem. Of is it becaused I am a sometimes disillusioned Catholic?

DENISE F. (deniseann) - 5/15/2007 2:23 PM ET

oops -- that's supposed to be an "or" not and "of"

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