I like it, except where it changes from second person to first person narration. Pretty cute poem, though.
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The Eclectic Pen - midnight my fish
By: Joyce M. (j3m) + 16 more
Date Submitted: 8/27/2008
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Words: 84
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| midnight you are so beautiful you patrol the tank so dutiful ever curious, nothing your nose doesn't need to be in is it a shrimp, maybe I can touch it is it a crayfish, maybe I can prod it what about that Gourami, he's not such big stuff don't understand what his deal is, I only touched him the catfish are much more understanding they do nothing when I drag my flowing fins over them I'm the most pleasent guy in the tank I love everyone I just want to touch them, that's all |
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