By: Emmy A. (emmytastic) + 6 more
Date Submitted: 7/27/2011
Last Updated: 7/27/2011
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 73
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It can the the noisest thing-
if you let it.
Driving you insane until you-
finally break.
Your own thoughts slowly become-
your enemy.
People'll try to tell you that-
it's okay.
But only you know what its like to be-
tortured from within.
They have no idea what I'm going through-
but they try.
To get into my head, into my thoughts-
to know what's wrong.
"Why are you acting this way?" they ask-
and I tell them.
Get a taste of your own tortured thoughts-
then you'll know.

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hingram77 - 7/31/2011 10:40 PM ET

Sounds like you're going through a rough patch right now. If you're writing from your own life, that is. It sounds like a teenager who is going through puberty. That's always a really hard time in a person's life because the hormones changing your body, also amp up the intensity of your feelings that can make you feel really out of control, you know?

Monica G. (calibella) - , - 8/9/2011 11:45 AM ET

Nice. People don't know what it's like to be you until they get have to deal with the situation or go through the same experiences.

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