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The Eclectic Pen - Warrior (or at least more of it)

By: Kami (Kidsey)   + 9 more  
Date Submitted: 5/10/2009
Last Updated: 5/10/2009
Genre: Teen & Young Adult » Science Fiction & Fantasy
Words: 378

  So it will be even more misty if you don't read the other warrior. Please comment! :D

Fitch finally let go of my arm when we arrived at my doorstep.
"Masiel," he said, his eyes wide,"I think i was meant to fight!"
"so am I." I said flatly.
"Well of course," He sputtered, rolling his eyes, "You're Warrior." I smiled. Of course I was meant for fighting, but Fitch? Just because he had a sword now couldn't mean anything. And he certainly had the worst aim when it came to guns and arrows.
I sighed, "Well if you where made to fight there is one thing we have to do."
His eyes widened, "What?"
"We should go to the range."

The range is a run-down grocery store. It's pretty big and right next to Cordacorans so its a great place to meet people. I was wearing my regular 'range cloths' My brown shirt and jeans. We walked inside. People milled around preparing for the next fight.
"Masiel!" Said the man with the gruffy beard.
"Come for'a rematch, aye?" This was none other than the one and only Mr. Feo Maulten.
"You wish," I said slyly, smiling hard.
"Well then!" He said, "Belly up to the bar and tell'a old Feo whatch'a need, Warrior!" I nudged Fitch, who was standing close next to me, "Fate has lead Fitch to fight."
"Chicken boy?" Bellowed Feo and laughed to his hearts content, "What, did you get in a fight'a with'a bull?"
Fitch winced, and Feo had him, "Son look't ya! Yer' nothin' but skin and bones boy!" He gurgled. The old man was tripping over his tounge and loving it. Poor Feo looked fit to burst.
I decided to back him up, "Common, give him a try. You never know!" I leaned closer, "He really needs this."
Feo looked at me strangly, "Ya' know, when a rabbit gets scared its heart starts pumpin' like there's no tomorrow, and, uh, then it stops and the thing'a dies. Its heart just stops! And the rabbit plops dead."
I laughed because I knew he was talking about Fitch.
"Don't worry," I said, "I'll be with him!"
Feo rolled his eyes, "Oh Warrior."

Yeah, I know its reeeeeaaaaallllyy misty and it doesn't explain like, anything! But if i write more thing come together and stuff! PLEEEEAAAASSE COMMENT!

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