Yvonne L. reviewed on 7/31/2011 + 929 more book reviews

Helpful Score: 2

I'm so glad I read the second book, "No Werewolves Allowed," first. That one was so much better. If I read this one first, I would have never continued with the series.

The writing here is very jumbled and confusing. Things don't move very smoothly. It's almost like McCray wanted to write a few scenes and then just stuck them together. There is also a lot of people and things to keep track off since this is the first book.

The characters were not well developed. As a result it was hard to connect with Nyx or anyone else. A lot of information were repeated.

Trust me. The second book is so much better and I completely fell in love with Nyx and Olivia there. Plus Adam is hunkier in that one. I have to say the second book have more obnoxious characters but at least they have personalities.

I plan to read the third one which will decide if I will continue with this series.

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