Ann M. (boochicken) reviewed on 8/20/2013 + 33 more book reviews

I've been very disappointed in Connealy's book lately. First the Kincaid brother books, and now Deep Trouble. There is no development in the love relationship, and the first kiss seems to be a shock to both the characters, I don't know many people who accidentally kisses. The main characters are unlikeable, esp the girl, who I find frustratingly naive and thickheaded, and the guy I find flaky. The supporting characters are very very many, and also not very developed. And the antagonists, those characters that are after them, are thoroughly evil and loathesome, and MC spends way too much time on those guys. Love stories don't have to be works of genius, but they must have character development and growth of love. Having a little love tension is enduring, building up to that first kiss is part of the fun. I won't be looking to read any more MC books. Or if I do, I'll be borrowing them.

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