This is the kind of writing I detest!
To begin-it takes place in Cornwall which doesn't matter but sets the place
So it begins when Matt and Jemma are invited 'back' to the place where a wedding was taking place, and from there is nothing but a boring mess, so introduce the 'sister of the groom' who has a tragic secret--of course--and she is found dead presumable from drowning after a midnight swim?
A couple of chapters about the sister was in italics and I hate that, I didn't bother with them
When she was found dead yada yada I lost interest
So the group was invited back? to find the reason of her death? her killer? who knows it totally stupid
To begin-it takes place in Cornwall which doesn't matter but sets the place
So it begins when Matt and Jemma are invited 'back' to the place where a wedding was taking place, and from there is nothing but a boring mess, so introduce the 'sister of the groom' who has a tragic secret--of course--and she is found dead presumable from drowning after a midnight swim?
A couple of chapters about the sister was in italics and I hate that, I didn't bother with them
When she was found dead yada yada I lost interest
So the group was invited back? to find the reason of her death? her killer? who knows it totally stupid
